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But I Promised You by ~justafool:iconjustafool:

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I promised to take care of you
I swore things would be all right
Oh sweetie, what have I got you into
I know I will fail
Despite trying with all my might

This is not news to you
I've said this before
Yet you still believe in me
Just what can I do

My mind is bundle of nerves confused
Between knowing what is right
And believing what is true
I'm always here for you to lean on
How long can I lean on you?
©2004-2010 ~justafool
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Must I describe everything??

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~zen1th Aug 31, 2004, 3:17:15 AM
very cool i particularly like the last line it turns the whole poem around and gets the reader thinking. Nicely done
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~justafool Aug 31, 2004, 4:48:30 AM
Thanks, sorry about making you think:) I know how much that can hurt sometimes. OUCH!!! Argggg, sorry, just had a thought:)

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"I started out with nothing, and I still have most of it." ~justafool:date:=squishykittie
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`Rushy Aug 31, 2004, 7:54:53 AM
Good stuff once more.
You really shouldn't be so down on yourself though, you came this far OK :)

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Member of :- #britain #DAPensioners .
In vino veritas, nunc est bibendum. - In wine is truth, now we must drink.
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~justafool Aug 31, 2004, 11:11:30 AM
Only through the blessings of the Gods and squishykittie. ;)

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"I started out with nothing, and I still have most of it." ~justafool:date:=squishykittie
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~HeroinApple Sep 1, 2004, 4:19:57 AM
I really like this one. It stood right out to me. I can relate to it alot.
Keep up the great work! :)

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+He is my Heroin, and I am the sweet Apple that tempts him.+
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~justafool Sep 1, 2004, 5:57:27 AM
Thank you:) I'm glad that it could speak to you as well.

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"I started out with nothing, and I still have most of it." ~justafool:date:=squishykittie
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~squishykittie Sep 1, 2004, 11:22:12 AM
:slap: don't think that!!! you will not fail, and you will never disappoint me! I don't care that you need to lean on my for a bit or forever! FOREVER! now pick yourself up and stop telling yourself things like that, I will always be here for you to lean on, I know you are here for me when I need to lean. so meh stop that! :cries: don't doubt yourself

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~justafool :date: :heart: :smooch: ~squishykittie

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~justafool Sep 3, 2004, 2:38:00 PM
I know I won't just as long as we are always there for each other:hug:

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"I started out with nothing, and I still have most of it." ~justafool:date:=squishykittie
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